Re: [Publicity] Today's blog post for review

[Stefano Stabellini <stefano.stabellini@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

On Tue, 3 Jun 2014, Lars Kurth wrote:
> http://blog.xen.org/?p=9606&preview=true
> Changes will require approval

The sentence

"Virtualization â in particular Xen Project virtualization â shows great
promise for this new class of SoCs"

doesn't flow very well. I would rephrase it as

"The Xen Project hypervisor shows great promise for this new class of SoCs."

Also the following is difficult to read:

"Caviumâs commitment to standards and driving key server capabilities â
such as GICv3 with 48 core support along with multi-socket cache
coherency up to 96 cores in a dual socket configuration â will be
valuable contributions to the Xen Project community."

Maybe I would reword it as

"Committed to ARMv8 standards, Cavium is driving key server
capabilities, such as GICv3 with 48 core support along with multi-socket
cache coherency up to 96 cores in a dual socket configuration. Cavium
has already started working with the Xen Project community to enhance
the hypervisor to best support these technologies."

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