[Xen-cim] Slide deck initial comments

["Szymanski, Lukasz K" <Lukasz.Szymanski@xxxxxxxxxx>]

Jim -

Overall I like the presentation.  Below are some initial thoughts:

Slide 1: CIM is increasing being adopted by IT industry -> increasingly

Slide 5: Add legend for red and green lines, since people may want to
download this later.

Slide 7: Maybe a little more history - why the DMTF CIM model was chosen
over other options (if there were any?)

Slide 18: Avoids needs -> Avoids need

I like the idea of a busy slide to bring together all the components.

Would it make sense to have slides 2-3-4 go in order 2-4-3 ?

There are several acronyms that are never defined.  I think it would be
beneficial for future downloads (and future wiki users) to define them
at first usage.

- Luke

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