[Xen-devel] [PATCH 1/2] README: Minor punctuation and grammar changes

[Ian Jackson <ian.jackson@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

* Add two missing "and"s and a missing semicolon (a la Oxford comma).
* Use a double-space after full stop (like the first paragraph does).

Signed-off-by: Ian Jackson <Ian.Jackson@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
CC: Konrad Rzeszutek Wilk <konrad.wilk@xxxxxxxxxx>
---
 README |    8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README b/README
index 8c7603f..3863c9e 100644
--- a/README
+++ b/README
@@ -22,11 +22,11 @@ development community, spearheaded by xen.org 
(http://www.xen.org).
 The 4.5 release offers a number of improvements, including: improvements for
 large scale machines during bootup and for PCI passthrough; multiple IO-REQ
 servers (many QEMUs for a guest); soft affinity for vCPUs (aka NUMA affinity);
-and API expansion for guest introspection. We also have number of updates for
+and API expansion for guest introspection.  We also have number of updates for
 CPU specific changes, such as: Broadwell Supervisor Mode Access Prevention;
 Haswell Server Cache QoS Monitoring aka Intel Resource Director Technology;
 further extensions to vAPIC (SandyBridge feature); fixes in AMD microcode
-loading; Data Breaking Extensions and further MSR masking support on AMD.
+loading; Data Breaking Extensions; and further MSR masking support on AMD.
 
 On the experimental side we have added a new Real-Time Deferrable Server Based
 CPU Scheduler (rtds), and PVH initial domain (dom0) support for Intel CPUs.
@@ -40,8 +40,8 @@ latency.
 The toolstack has expanded to include support for: VM Generation ID (a Windows
 2012 Server requirement); Remus initial support (for high availability)
 in libxl (since xend has been removed); libxenlight JSON support and persistent
-configuration support, systemd support; and support in QEMU for expanding the
-PCI hole.
+configuration support, and systemd support; and support in QEMU for expanding
+the PCI hole.
 
 Lastly, we have removed the Python toolstack (xend).
 
-- 
1.7.10.4


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