Re: [Xen-devel] [PATCH 5/5] SUPPORT.md: Document the new text ordering rule

[Lars Kurth <lars.kurth@xxxxxxxxxx>]

On 13/04/2018, 11:31, "Ian Jackson" <ian.jackson@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

    Lars Kurth writes ("Re: [PATCH 5/5] SUPPORT.md: Document the new text 
ordering rule"):
    ...
    >     +In each case, descriptions which expand on the name of a feature as
    >     +provided in the section heading, precede the Status indications.
    > 
    > The following is a little clearer
    > s/, descriptions which expand on the name of a feature as provided in the 
section heading,/, descriptions which describe the feature in the section 
heading in more detail,/
    
    I used the wording I did because the word "description" is very
    elastic, and might well be thought to include things that we intend as
    caveats.
    
I don't mind either way. Just something which sounded odd. 

Lars


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