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Re: [PATCH v3] docs: fusa: Add Assumption of Use (AoU)
- To: Andrew Cooper <andrew.cooper3@xxxxxxxxxx>
- From: Bertrand Marquis <Bertrand.Marquis@xxxxxxx>
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- Thread-topic: [PATCH v3] docs: fusa: Add Assumption of Use (AoU)
Hi Andrew,
> On 24 Sep 2024, at 10:15, Andrew Cooper <andrew.cooper3@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>
> On 24/09/2024 8:14 am, Bertrand Marquis wrote:
>>>>> diff --git a/docs/fusa/reqs/intro.rst b/docs/fusa/reqs/intro.rst
>>>>> index 245a219ff2..aa85ff821c 100644
>>>>> --- a/docs/fusa/reqs/intro.rst
>>>>> +++ b/docs/fusa/reqs/intro.rst
>>>>> @@ -38,6 +38,16 @@ The requirements are linked using OpenFastTrace
>>>>> OpenFastTrace parses through the requirements and generates a traceability
>>>>> report.
>>>>>
>>>>> +Assumption of Use
>>>>> +=================
>>>>> +
>>>>> +To fulfill one or more design requirements, there may be underlying
>>>>> assumptions
>>>>> +on one or more components that Xen interacts with directly or
>>>>> indirectly. For
>>>>> +eg, there may be assumptions on the underlying platform (hardware +
>>>>> firmware +
>>>>> +bootloader) to set certain registers, etc. The important thing here is
>>>>> that
>>>>> +anyone who validates these requirements, need to consider the assumption
>>>>> on the
>>>>> +other components.
>>> I think there is a typo.
>>>> I would simplify a bit:
>>>> Xen is making several assumptions on the status of the platform or on some
>>>> functions being present and functional.
>>> s/functional/functionality.
>> no that sounds weird, functional is right in the sentence i think.
>
> "functional" is correct grammar here. "functionality" would not be.
>
> However, "functions being present and functional" less than ideal. I'd
> suggest "present and working", "present and operational" instead, or to
> rework the first "functions" into something else.
"Present and operational" sounds good to me as they might be working
but be deactivated by firmware for example.
Cheers
Bertrand
>
> ~Andrew
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