Re: [Publicity] My 1st OSCON submission for this year : "War Stories : Squaring the Circle between Business and Community"

[Lars Kurth <lars.kurth@xxxxxxx>]

On 28/01/2014 15:05, George Dunlap wrote:
> It sounds to me like a pretty cool talk.  But I wonder if maybe your 
> second paragraph is a bit vague.  I have an idea what kinds of stories 
> you might tell, and why the underlying issues and lessons will be 
> interesting and important; but someone else reading it might not.  I 
> think I would explicitly state that they're stories about times when 
> business and community conflicted, some of which resolved well, some 
> of which ended up as disasters.  (Unless they were all disasters, in 
> which case just say that.) :-)
You are right: I was wondering myself how to cover this better. I don't 
think they are all disasters. But I like your go at at.
I didn't want to list concrete examples, as this would restrict me in 
designing the talk too much.
Lars

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