Re: [Xen-devel] [PATCH] docs: add misc/qemu-backends.txt

[Andrew Cooper <andrew.cooper3@xxxxxxxxxx>]

>>> +Xenstore the backend information is presented there. <qemu> is built
>> That looks to be missing an verb, no it has a verb, something is off with
>> that.
>>
>> XenStore presents the backend information there?
> No, qemu is presenting the information in Xenstore.

"Xenstore" is not the start of the sentence - it follows on from the
previous line, but even as a native English speaker it took me a while
to figure out.

A comma should be present (i.e. "As $FOO, $BAR relating to $FOO"), and
it would aid clarity.

+As each qemu instance owns a path (named "<qemu>" from now on) in
+Xenstore, the backend information is presented there. <qemu> is built

~Andrew

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